blog#6

Blog#6

In this blog I’m going to take about the all the things I learn in this term by doing all of this assignment for mister roy turner. First of all in the review about the teens and technology that was vey help full to me because I learn to say what I think of a article in al paper and also with the summary I learn way to put down in my own words what the summary we read was saying but the only thing is that we write the main ideas of the summary we read in class also with the instruction I learn how to explain things to other people and shoe them with pictures that was very hard for me because I can’t explain things to good I just know how to do them.   

blog#5

In this blog I want to talk about my essay. In this essay I did some good things like my story was very good and my intro was not. But I think that what I did wrong was that I did not give inoff information of the background in the essay and also that I did not do so good with my spelling and also with my sentences in my intro with my thises that was ok but mister turner say that I needed to put them together and so that they could be in on full sentence and not all separate like I had it. So I learn that I needed to work more with my spelling and also with getting my sentences all together and make them clear and like saying in off information at first before going into the story that I m going to tell in the essay.    

blog#4

This blog is I like to talk about the my instructions paper. In this assignment I got a 2 because I did not put my visuals big and because my sentences were not to clear. I learn that I need to write my sentences more detailed because they are instructions and I need to make them detailed in off to the people that has to look at my instructions. And make my visuals vey big and make more clearly so they people can understand them and know what I was trying to say and explain to them I learn that I need to be more clear on what I’m trying to say make them clear and understandable.        

blog#3

In this blog I’m going to write about what I learn in the corrections I did in the review about teens and technology, were we had to write about what we think about the summery about technology and teens. And most of the thinks I did wrong is spelling and my grammar. But the majority is spelling. But its not too bad, juts some words that are carless that I did not go over as much when I was writing the review. So I suggest to go over your work after you are finish with it.  

Blog #2

The 3 assignments I decided to put down for my port folio is the application letter, the summery about teens and technology, and the review about teens and technology. I decided to put this 3 because they are the ones that I got a higher score on, and because they look like they are good for me to fix up. And also because they had less things to do for me to worry about. I think that when I put them down for my port folio they are going to make me look smart because I’m going to make them really good for my final grad in this class.

blot #1

In this blog I want to talk about what I learn, when I had to fix up the summary of writing technology and teens. When I first got it I the results of my paper I got a 3 and that was because I was writing too much things that were not necessary to write I made to many sentences that were too long and say not to much information so I think that we need to write things that are short but you need to say it how it is not making a big story about it.      

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